Animals and Insects
Monday
Using the Right Word, Subject-Verb Agreement
Original Sentence
Every year millions of trees are planted by squirrels who buries nuts and then forgets ware they put them.
Corrected Sentence
Every year millions of trees are planted by squirrels that bury nuts and then forget where they put them.
Tuesday
Using the Right Word, Parallelism, Plurals
Original Sentence
Sum kindes of ants rule other ants; they attack them, kidnap them, and then are keeping them as slaves.
Corrected Sentence
Some kinds of ants rule other ants; they attack them, kidnap them, and keep them as slaves.
Wednesday
Using the Right Word, Adjective (Articles), Pronoun (Reflexive)
Original Sentence
A aunt can lift 50 times its own wait all by himself.
Corrected Sentence
An ant can lift 50 times its own weight all by itself.
Comma (Unnecessary), Using the Right Word
Original Sentence
A cockroach, can live four several weaks without it's head.
Corrected Sentence
A cockroach can live for several weeks without its head.
Thursday
Using the Right Word, Comma (Between Independent Clauses)
Original Sentence
Ants wake up in the mourning and they yawn and stretch before going off too work.
Corrected Sentence
Ants wake up in the morning, and they yawn and stretch before going off to work.
Friday
Comma (Between Independent Clauses), Adjective (Articles), Plurals, Pronoun (Reflexive), Parallelism, Using the Right Word
Original Paragraph
Squirrels devote lots of time to food-searching for it, burying it, then they search for it again. The seed and nuts they enjoy are scarce in winter but abundant in autumn so they store large food supplys in the ground. Every year milliones of trees are planted by squirrels who bury seeds and nuts and then were forgetting where they put them. But if they have a good memory and an sharp sense of smell, they can retrieve the hidden food for their selfs during a winter.
Corrected Paragraph
Squirrels devote lots of time to food-searching for it, burying it, then searching for it again. The seeds and nuts they enjoy are scarce in winter but abundant in autumn, so they store large food supplies in the ground. Every year millions of trees are planted by squirrels that bury seeds and nuts and then forget where they put them. But if they have a good memory and a sharp sense of smell, they can retrieve the hidden food for themselves during the winter.
