Around the World
Monday
Capitalization, Using the Right Word, Hyphen (Single-Thought Adjectives)
Original Sentence
the great wall of china is the only man made structure that can be scene from space with the naked eye.
Corrected Sentence
The Great Wall of China is the only man-made structure that can be seen from space with the naked eye.
Tuesday
End Punctuation, Capitalization, Misplaced Modifier
Original Sentence
did you know that people in Ancient China would build their towns from the air to look like animals.
Corrected Sentence
Did you know that people in ancient China would build their towns to look like animals from the air?
Wednesday
Using the Right Word, Comma Splice, End Punctuation
Original Sentence
The Dead Sea is the saltiest body of water in the world, it's nine times saltier then the ocean
Corrected Sentence
The Dead Sea is the saltiest body of water in the world. It's nine times saltier than the ocean!
Thursday
Using the Right Word, Capitalization, Run-on Sentence
Original Sentence
While we were in the grand canyon, I fell off a mule my mother asked, "Are you alright?"
Corrected Sentence
While we were in the Grand Canyon, I fell off a mule. My mother asked, "Are you all right?"
Friday
Comma for Numbers and Addresses, Irregular Verb, Spelling
Original Sentence
In 1868, about 100000 meterites falled on Pultusk Poland in just one night.
Corrected Sentence
In 1868, about 100,000 meteorites fell on Pultusk, Poland, in just one night.
Unsolved Mysteries
Capitalization, Run-On Sentence, Using the Right Word, End Punctuation, Misplaced Modifier, Spelling
Original Paragraph
Mysteries around the world raze questions about alien travelers from outer space. Today in the united states, a small percentage of UFO reports cannot be explained buy investigaters. Centuries ago in south america, someone made long gouges that resemble landing strips in the earth's surface. And in Ancient china, people built towns from the air that looked like animals. Were these people expecting visitors from the skies. Some say yes what do you think.
Corrected Paragraph
