Animals Great and Small
Monday
Using the Right Word, Parentheses, End Punctuation, Capitalization, Interjections
Original Sentence
The average hummingbird there are 19 varieties in the United States ways less then a penny, wow.
Corrected Sentence
The average hummingbird (there are 19 varieties in the United States) weighs less than a penny. Wow!
Tuesday
Using the Right Word, Run-On Sentence, Apostrophe (Posessives), Adjectives (Articles)
Original Sentence
A baby kangaroo is only about a inch long at berth it can survive only in it's mothers pouch.
Corrected Sentence
A baby kangaroo is only about an inch long at birth; it can survive only in its mother's pouch.
Wednesday
Subject-verb Agreement, Using the Right Word
Original Sentence
Fore every human being in the world, there is too chickens.
Corrected Sentence
For every human being in the world, there are two chickens.
Subject-Verb Agreement, Capitalization, End Punctuation
Original Sentence
White sharks never get sick and is completely immune to Cancer
Corrected Sentence
White sharks never get sick and are completely immune to cancer. or !
Thursday
Comma (To Separate Adjectives and To Separate Phrases and Clauses), Using the Right Word, End Punctuation
Original Sentence
If a goldfish is kept in the dark will it loose it's bright wonderful color.
Corrected Sentence
If a goldfish is kept in the dark, will it lose its bright, wonderful color?
Friday
Three Blind Creatures
Comma (To Separate Phrases and Clauses)(2), Using the Right Word (3), End Punctuation (2), Capitalization (10), Run-on Sentence (1)
Original Paragraph
Cavefish live in the cool underground waters of echo river inside mammoth cave, kentucky. Not only do these fish lack eyes but there bodies also lack pigmentation. These strange little fish are only three inches long they are pink because their blood shows threw they're flesh. Why don't they have eyes. Living in total darkness the cavefish have no need to see. Other blink creatures living in mammoth cave include Beetles and Crayfish.
Corrected Paragraph
Cavefish live in the cool underground waters of the Echo River inside Mammoth Cave, Kentucky. Not only do these fish lack eyes, but their bodies also lack pigmentation. These strange little fish are only three inches long. They are pink because their bloods shows through their flesh. Why don't' they have eyes? Living in total darkness, the cavefish have no need to see. Other blind creatures living in Mammoth Cave include beetles and crayfish.
